Ok so I realize that it is infact 10 to 2 in the morning... But I can not sleep for the life of me...
so I thought that I would post some of my poetry and get some critique from you all...
SHINE
broken time with unheard rhymes
shattered hearts bleeding a new love
what will be my release
to see the light of a brand new day
rising over the open sea?
my release is you
what is not seen is my love
stronger than the great wall
deeper than whats beyond the shores
higher than the heavens above
sacred, sometimes unheard
structured but also not
grow as it does from the hidden seed
planted by your unknowing eyes
nurtured by thoughts and talks
let yourself in and close the door
turn the lock swallow the key
forever it will remain locked
lust turned to love once more
different this love shall be
make me shine, a radiant glow
yours to keep for eternity
live within me make me shine
make me live within you
shine with me
to exit from this heart would be murder
my soul will perish to dead mans cove
to remain in turmoil and darkness
you are the beacon of light
pray that it never goes out
R.J. Clark
3 comments:
awwwwww russ that is so nice
You already know I love your work, so I dont really think I need to praise you anymore, you'd just get a big head
Hows my funeral one coming along? And remember it needs intepretive dance too!
that's really nice Russell :)
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